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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Firstly, the vision behind the photo is genius. it has a lot of impact.
I can actually feel the person's hand reaching out for help or for helping a friends who is injured.
the realism of the wounds on his face is amazing!
I love what you did with the depth of field, looks very good.
the colour and brightness / contrast adjustments is 60% of the photo for me, I think without the little red tint and those warm colours mixing, this would look like a totally different photo.
I think those little straws of grass or what ever this is on the ground is a bit too much, I just doesn't match.
The model in this photo also did a grate job for what I can see,
I love his eye expiration, it is exactly what I would expect from a man featuring in this kind of scene.
Things that you can improve:
*I would love to see this piece in a 6:9 module, I think it will fit in perfectly here !
*I think changing the position of the text to a bit less dominant place will be good.
Overall this photo is truly amazing in its beauty and vision.
I would gladly want to see more photos like this from you! good job!
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